Drafting An Affidavit Requires Factually Based Statements Rather Than Opinion Based Conjecture
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Can An Affidavit Be Struck From Review By a Judge If the Affidavit Contains Personal Thoughts or Viewpoints and Opinions?
Understanding the Proper Drafting of An Affidavit Including Using Factual Statements Only Versus Opinion Viewpoints

also known as the deponent who is swearing or affirming to the truth of statements within the Affidavit, stating an interpretation of what happened is irrelevant and improper as it is for the court to interpret what happened.
The Law
… Self serving protestations of surprise, shock, disgust or other emotions claimed by a deponent are a waste of time and counsel would do well to remember that …
… The court is not concerned to know whether he was “shocked” or otherwise offended by what the other did, unless that is made relevant by some condition induced in him which explains some act attributed against him. It is the court’s opinion of a party’s actions that is important. Self-serving protestations of surprise, shock, disgust or other emotions claimed by a deponent are a waste of time and counsel would do well to remember that. It is even more objectionable when a deponent is permitted by counsel to swear what a third person’s feelings were as the result of what the opposite party did, or swear to what a third person has or has not experienced in his or her lifetime. If that is relevant at all, and it can rarely be so, then that third person should depose to it directly and give the factual foundation upon which he or she relies. If it is to be tendered by hearsay … then the source of the information and a belief in it must be deposed to.
Refrain From Stating An Opinion Unless Expert Opinion
Avoiding Ultimate Decision Opinions
In a legal case, it is the Judge who holds the duty to form an ultimate decision about the issues involved; and accordingly, a deponent who provides an Affidavit should avoid expressions of opinion that address the issue before the court such as personal views as to whether another person acted improperly as such a determination should be left to the Court to decide; and accordingly, the deponent of an Affidavit should
Examples
The following sample statements are provided to help illustrate what are inappropriate personal thoughts, viewpoints, and opinions, within an Affidavit document:
Proper Statements
- 1. On July 1st, 2021, I observed the driving of John Smith.
- 2. John Smith was driving along highway 401 in Toronto.
- 3. John Smith was driving at approximately 120 kilometers per hour.
- 4. John Smith changed lanes six (6) times within the stretch of highway between Yonge Street and Avenue Road.
- 5. During the final lane change, John Smith collided with the automobile driven by Sally Brown..
Improper Statements
- 1. On July 1st, 2021, some of my friends saw John Smith speeding and driving erratically..
- 2. John Smith caused an accident that injured Sally Brown.
- 3. John Smith is a bad driver and should be found guilty of careless driving.
- 4. John Smith should also be found liable and be forced to pay for causing the injuries to Sally Brown.
- 5. Also, when John Smith was ten (10) years-old, John took an extra cookie after being told to only have one.
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